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Title:   A Beautiful Lie - part 4 of A Woman Scorned
Author:
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Rating:   PG-13
Word Count:   1381
Pairing/Characters:   Harry/Draco, Ginny
Challenge:   AWDT challenge "A Beautiful Lie," and [profile] 100quills prompt 024 - "absurd"
Warnings:   No beta. Please point out any errors you find.
Summary:   Harry tries to find a way out of his current situation.
Disclaimer:   The characters contained herein are not mine. They belong to JK Rowling and her publishers. No money is being made from this fiction, which is presented for entertainment purposes only.

Part 1 - A Valentine Surprise
Part 2 - The Plan
Part 3 - Without a Trace

 

As Ginny took his tray away, humming contentedly to herself, all Harry could think is this is absurd. She really thinks we're going to live happily ever after like this!

It had been a week or so now, since Ginny had kidnapped him and brought him to this "cozy little cottage in the country," as she had put it. He wasn't exactly sure how long it had been, since he had been drugged for the first part of it, and again a couple of times, just when he had started regaining his strength. Since then, he had been sure to mask just how strong he was getting. His magic reverberated through him, but without his wand, he felt useless.

Ginny had wards around herself, which he had discovered one time when he tried to grab her arm, and was jolted back with what felt like an electrical charge. It was right after that when she had drugged him again. He hadn't tried that again since. Truth be told, he was pleased that she didn't want him touching her. Yet, anyway. He shuddered as he thought about exactly what she might have in mind for him. After all, she said she was in love with him. It was only a matter of time before she wanted to show him just how much. He shuddered as the image of her touching him entered his mind unbidden.

Draco, where are you? Never mind that - where am I? How the hell am I supposed to get out of here?
  At least with a clear mind, the drug-induced fog having lifted, he could try to formulate a plan. Of course, that wasn't his forte. That was what Hermione and Draco were good at. Harry was more of an act now, ask questions later kind of guy that was good at executing plans, not devising them. This kind of thinking, he kept telling himself, was the reason why he was still there. He shook his head, as if to physically dismiss the negative thoughts. He took a deep breath, and tried to recall everything Ginny had said to him over the past week. Maybe she had inadvertently let something slip.

He knew that they were untraceable - or so she said. He couldn't dwell on that part, anyway, since he had no control over what others were doing to find him. He needed to focus on finding a weakness here - in the wards, in the house, in Ginny. Ginny was the key, of course. He needed to manipulate her into letting down her guard. He was her weakness, after all. Unfortunately, it was not in Harry's nature to manipulate people. He wore his heart on his sleeve, so it was difficult to mask his true emotions and lie to those he cared about. But did he even care about Ginny any more? Of course he did. But this wasn't Ginny. This was some sick woman who needed help.

That's it! He would need to focus on that. First, he thought back to school, and how easy it was to lie to people in a position of authority over him. He was able to lie to the professors when caught at something. Now it was Ginny who held the power. He needed to stop thinking of her as Ginny, and start thinking of her as his captor. She was the obstacle preventing him from living, from being with Draco. She was now the enemy. Good. That's a start. Maybe he really could do this.

Second, he thought about Ginny - no, his captor - and what made her tick. Of course, he couldn't know for sure what was going on in that delusional mind of hers, but he wasn't a complete idiot. He could figure this out. She was a witch with strong inherent magic, who was also extremely good with hexes and charms. She was good defensively, no thanks to his own training of her in the DA. She was also smart. Not Hermione-smart, but still very smart. And obviously cunning, or she would not have been able to pull this off in the first place.

But she had her weakness. Everyone had at least one. And hers was Harry. Now what was he going to do? The easy answer was pretend to be in love with her, but he knew she would see right through that. No, his manipulation needed to be more subtle, more gradual than that. Much as he wanted to escape right away, he needed to make her think that she was the one changing his mind. She needed to be the one in charge. She needed to "show Harry the error of his ways," as she had put it. Well, maybe he would have to let her do that, after all. Determined, Harry drew on all his Slytherin qualities, and started to formulate the plan in his mind. This could work. No - this HAD to work!

"Ginny!" he called. He had not summoned her to his room before, so he knew he was taking a risk. But now that he had an idea of what he was going to do, he wanted to waste no time.

She arrived at his door looking confused, and perhaps a little bit pleased that he had called her. "Yes?" she asked warily.

"You'll probably say no, and I'll understand if you do, but I'm going a little snaky here. Do you think we could have a cup of tea together and talk?"

Her look clearly said you're not fooling me.

"No? Well, okay. You know, I didn't want to say anything." He bit his lower lip, and stared at his feet, looking as vulnerable as he could. "It's just that ... well, you know what it was like for me growing up. I was always stuck by myself, locked away, and it was really hard for me. I've tried not to let this get to me, but I can't help but feel like I'm back there, in that time, in that place. And right now, I just need someone else to talk to. Do you think we could do that, Gin? Do you think we could talk?" He put on the best kicked puppy dog look that he could, as he lifted his eyes to meet hers.

He watched Ginny's face, as she warred with herself. She loved him, and wanted him to be happy, but she was hurting him. She hadn't thought about the effect locking him up would have. Now she was the cause of his pain. But could she trust him?

"It's okay, Ginny. I understand. I just thought ... well ... the wards here are impenetrable - you told me that yourself. You have your own protection around you, so I can't hurt you. I have no wand, so I can't do magic. It's not like I could go anywhere or do anything. And it would only be for half an hour. Please? I promise you I won't try anything. I just want - no, I need - to get out of this room for a little bit, so I don't go crazy." The irony of that last statement wasn't lost on Harry, but he didn't let on.

Ginny's eyes narrowed on him, and she looked like she was going to argue with him. "Never mind," he said, his voice catching. "I don't expect you to understand. How could you?" He walked away from the door, and fell onto the bed. He then turned to face the window, curled up, and began to sob. As he felt the ripple of the wards on the room drop, he didn't react. Nor did he move when he felt Ginny's hand on his shoulder.

"Oh, Harry, I'm so sorry." He turned to look up at her, then wrapped his arms around her waist, and sobbed into her shoulder. "I didn't know. I really didn't know," she said, sounding as though she was on the verge of tears herself. He said nothing, as his body shook in her embrace. He was actually quite surprised at just how easily the tears flowed. And how easy it was to lie to her. Well, he had to admit - it was a beautiful lie, after all.

Part 5

 

Date: 2007-03-04 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] faynia.livejournal.com
*pets false angsting Harry* *cackles*

Date: 2007-03-04 07:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Hehehe ... glad you enjoyed it.

I hope you read the "fixed" version, as LJ is doing wonky things ... it scooped half a paragraph, plunked it down to the bottom of the fic, and put everything after that in italics (grrrr). If it was NOT all italics at the bottom, and the last line was "a beautiful lie," you read the right one.

Date: 2007-03-04 08:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] faynia.livejournal.com
It was the right version, ljs been real wonky lately stupid lj *kicks it*

Date: 2007-03-04 08:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Oh, good, because it really f'd up the storyline doing that. And made it a pain to read, all italics. I even deleted & re-posted it, and it did the same thing. WTF?!? It's fine in my word processing doc. Whatever.

Date: 2007-03-04 08:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enablelove.livejournal.com
yes Slytherin!Harry!!!

Date: 2007-03-04 08:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
I suspect that Draco's been helping him get in touch with his inner Slytherin! Muahaha!

Date: 2007-03-04 08:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jean-c-pepper.livejournal.com
It was a beautiful lie. I want Harry to blast her, and get back to Draco. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Date: 2007-03-04 09:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Thanks - glad you're enjoying it. Next chapter is back to Draco. We'll see how he's progressing.

Date: 2007-03-04 09:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sassy-cissa.livejournal.com
This is really wonderful. I love sneaky!Harry. Good work

Date: 2007-03-04 09:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Thank you. I suspect he'll be giving his inner Slytherin a workout.

Date: 2007-03-05 02:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lackofmendacity.livejournal.com
Wow, I never realised Harry had such potential! *cheers for Harry* It was wonderful to see him calculating Ginny's strengths and weaknesses, and I hope his manipulations continue well :)

Yay! Things are looking (slightly) up! *hugs* Don't go all angsty on us at the end, okay? :D

Date: 2007-03-05 03:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Harry didn't realize he had that potential either. But faced with nobody to do the planning for him, he had to do something. *nods*

Don't go all angsty on us at the end, okay? Muahaha! *cackles maniacally* Who, me?!?

Date: 2007-03-05 04:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nomeci.livejournal.com
I love when Harry plots things out... He has more talent than he gives himself credit for... I cant wait to see this bitch get hers...!

Date: 2007-03-05 04:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Scheming!Harry is love. ♥
Yes he does. *nods*
Hmmm ... will she or won't she?

Date: 2007-03-05 04:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nomeci.livejournal.com
even if she doesnt in this fic - I will make sure she does somewhere else! lol

Date: 2007-03-05 04:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Heh! I'm not feelin' the Ginny love here! :o)

Psst ... I think she might just get some here. *winks*

Date: 2007-03-05 05:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nomeci.livejournal.com
actually I am really enjoying writing Ginny in the story I am working on now... but "Resident Bitch" does seem to be her default setting in a lot of people's work... lol

Date: 2007-03-05 05:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
I don't have a hate on for Ginny ... her character just happens to be writing itself that way in this fic.

Date: 2007-03-05 08:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piratesmile331.livejournal.com
I seem to have lost track of this story since the first chapter. I'm so glad I found it again. I'm all caught up now...(and I've got you tracked now!).
I'm glad Harry has his wits about him, and also that he doesn't completely hate Ginny. She is obviously sick in this story. That doesn't make it better for Draco and Harry, but I'm glad he's still compassionate. I like the way he just made himself picture her as his enemy/captor. And I love the idea of Hermione and Draco teaming up to find him.

Date: 2007-03-05 10:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading and commenting. And I'm glad you enjoyed it.

No, Harry can't completely hate Ginny, because he knows she isn't acting rationally. And yes, I like Hermione and Draco working together too. They are the focus of the next one!

Date: 2007-03-05 10:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piratesmile331.livejournal.com
I'm so looking forward to the next installment!

Date: 2007-03-05 11:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Glad to hear it (me too, actually). I'm trying to make a point of updating this story once a week, so stay tuned!

Date: 2007-03-05 10:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piratesmile331.livejournal.com
PS, I just friended you. I hope you don't mind. (The better to keep up with your stories, which I've been following through [livejournal.com profile] 100_quills.)
(Reply to this)(Parent)

Date: 2007-03-05 11:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
I do not mind at all! Welcome to the f-list.

I haven't posted this one exclusively to [livejournal.com profile] 100_quills, so that explains why you "lost track" after the first. I respond to lots of different challenges, and latch on to whatever fits best ... but I generally post all (except some [livejournal.com profile] hd_100 and [livejournal.com profile] dracoharry100 drabbles) to my LJ, so you shouldn't miss any now.

Thanks again for reading & commenting.

Date: 2007-03-05 03:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alaana-fair.livejournal.com
Oh, I so love it when Harry taps into his Slytherin side! And who in their right mind could resist Harry's kicked puppy look - Ginny has so met her match!

Now I'm just worried that Draco's going to walk in on them or see them and not realize Harry's pretending. Can't wait for the next update!

Date: 2007-03-05 10:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Mhmm ... I like Harry's Slytherin side too. And he's been with Draco long enough now that he's been able to work on those skills. :o)

I'm just worried that Draco's going to walk in on them - Hmmm ... plot bunny? *puts away for future reference*

Thanks for reading!

Date: 2007-03-09 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deductress.livejournal.com
I. Absolutley. LOVE. This!

OMFG!!! Why have i never noticed this before????

It is UTTER genius!!! I <3 it!!!!

Excellent work honey!

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Date: 2007-03-10 12:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Thanks so much. Glad you are enjoying it. I do love a good mystery myself.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!! I'm hoping to post something this weekend, or early next week.

Date: 2007-03-11 10:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] irresistableplx.livejournal.com
absolutely lovely...
Ive always liked your writing style though I often feel that your pieces were too short...maybe im just more of a lengthy fic person :)
Anyway im glad i chanced upon this story of yours, I cant wait till the next time you update :D

Date: 2007-03-11 10:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Thank you. I have to tell you that I find your comment about "too short" amusing, since I am generally a lengthy writer (I wrote a 72,000+ word youth book, but was told by a publisher that they want them in the 45,000 word range - yikes!)

I only started with fanfiction in January, and have been utilizing this forum to work on brevity. *laughs* Apparently it's working! A lot of what I've been writing in the fandom is limited to 100 or 200 words, because of the nature of the communities. Some others "suggest" capping the word count at 500 words, but allow authors to go over ... so I try not to go TOO MUCH over.

BUT ... I'm writing for some fic exchanges (just finished one for [livejournal.com profile] slashfest), and those are not limited ... so you can expect to see a few longer ones from me in the near future. Hopefully you'll like them.

Thanks again for reading & commenting. ♥

Date: 2007-03-12 12:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] irresistableplx.livejournal.com
Hehe, yeah ive always seen you in the 100 word drabbles type of community. About practicing on brevity, your already good! I like the way how you are able to relay such emotions in your characters even though the piece was so short.

oh well im off to check if you have updated :D (my net these days is too frigging slow :S)

Date: 2007-03-12 09:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Thanks! ♥

Sorry ... no update yet ... it wasn't flowing yesterday, and I don't want to post something I'm not happy with ... so tonight or tomorrow is the plan.

*goes to write [livejournal.com profile] slythindor100 fic first, then update this one*

Date: 2007-03-12 05:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] acromantular.livejournal.com
He was actually quite surprised at just how easily the tears flowed. And how easy it was to lie to her.
Heh. That's what some quality time around Draco will do to a fellow.

Ginny really doesn't know what she's in for, does she...

*waits for next week*

Date: 2007-03-12 09:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
That's what some quality time around Draco will do to a fellow. You've got that right! Harry may not know who she is any more, but neither does she know just how Slytherin Harry can be.

I'll work on it tonight, and hopefully post the next installment today or tomorrow.

Date: 2007-03-15 09:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] charmed310.livejournal.com
Go Harry!!!!!

Date: 2007-03-15 11:38 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-02-19 09:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] andrea--88.livejournal.com
See Harry, how easy it is when you actually take the time to think things through and plan
Love how he's turning the tables on Ginny

excellent

Date: 2008-02-19 09:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
He's trying anyway.

Thanks.

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