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Title: Only Natural (Harry's remix)
Author: [livejournal.com profile] sesheta_66
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~ 465
Pairing/Characters: Harry/Draco
Challenges: [livejournal.com profile] slythindor100's challenges #70 - to remix someone else's fic. I chose Only Natural by [livejournal.com profile] alisanne.
Summary: Original - "The voice of my father still loud as before, it used to scare me but not anymore." Remix is from Harry's point of view.
Disclaimer: The author is not responsible for underage readers. Please observe the ratings, warnings, and age of legal consent for your country. The characters contained herein are not mine. They belong to JK Rowling and her publishers. No money is being made from this fiction, which is presented for entertainment purposes only.



Harry heard the voice say, "You again?" as Draco entered the Manor's ancestral library. His heart ached as the door shut, blocking him from view.

It frustrated Harry being on the other side of the door. He felt like he was sending Draco to be slaughtered ... one cruel word at a time. He wished he could go in with him, support him, defend him. But the one time he had tried had been an unmitigated disaster. Lucius could be heard for days screaming from the library, and not even the strongest silencing charms worked. He knew it was better this way, but it didn't assuage his guilt.

"Is he still here as well?" he heard Lucius' voice call out. He cringed, knowing that he couldn't stop the monthly barrage of insults and verbal attacks on Draco by his father. Once the portrait had found out that Draco was gay - and living with the man responsible for Voldemort's eventual demise - he had been impossible to approach. He was, after all, only a portrait, which meant he could not be expected to change. He was the ever-loving, sweet-natured Lucius that Harry had known as a child, and there was nothing they could do to change that.

"You are a disgrace to the family name and a fool." Harry's hands were clenched in tight fists, and he was restraining himself from entering the room. He wished that there was some way to avoid this monthly torture, but the accounting book couldn't be removed from the library.

Finally he heard Draco's footsteps approaching just before he opened the door. Harry watched as the pain etched on his face spoke volumes. Draco leaned against the door, eyes closed, no doubt holding back a wave of emotion.

"Okay?" he asked, as he squeezed his shoulder to offer comfort. He knew from prior months that Draco preferred to handle this his way, so he offered support and waited to be asked for more.

"It's just hard. I know he can't change, but I still wish..."

Harry couldn't hold back any longer, pulling him close and willing for the strength to keep his own anger, boiling just below the surface, at bay.

"I know," he said, trying to be rational, "but that's the nature of portraits. They don't change or grow all that much."

Draco cracked a pained smile towards Harry. "True enough. Well, it's done for now. Now it's your job to make me forget all the things he said to me before I have to go back in there next month."

If it weren't so painful, Harry would have laughed at that. As if Draco even had to ask. "Mmm, that I can do," he said, and led the way to their bedroom to start his new assignment.

Date: 2007-10-18 08:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] winter-june.livejournal.com
I'm sure Harry will find a way to kiss Draco's hurt better :)
And about Lucius portrait, I suggest to move it to somewhere, like the house elves' latrine (I read this idea before and find it hilarius, ha!), or if it's un-removable, wall up the door.

Date: 2007-10-18 08:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enchanted-jae.livejournal.com
Poor babies. *torches the portrait of Lucius*

Date: 2007-10-18 09:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lire-casander.livejournal.com
It was nice to read Harry's point of view. I really liked the original, and this one is really beautiful as well!

Date: 2007-10-18 11:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gurliemoviegeek.livejournal.com
So beautiful, hon.
And I really loved seeing things from Harry's point of view; the frustration, the anger.

Wonderfully done!

*helps Jae torch the portrait*

Date: 2007-10-18 12:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaykayen.livejournal.com
Very nice switch of POV. BTW, I think this is the first time I've ever read the words "sweet-natured" and "Lucius" in one sentence ^__^!

*grabs flamethrower and joins above-mentioned torching party*

Date: 2007-10-18 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Oh, yes ... Harry's had some practice. He'll be feeling much better in no time. ;)

Alas, the portrait (though not mentioned in the original) I presume either has a permanent sticking charm on it (similar to Mrs. Black's pic at Grimmauld Place), or it's too traditional a placement (ancestral library) for Draco to consider moving it.

Can't wall up the door, because the family accounting book is spelled not to be removed, so Draco has to enter once a month.

Date: 2007-10-18 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Hearing those types of screams from Lucius' portrait might be kinda fun, huh?

Date: 2007-10-18 01:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Thanks. ♥ The original really pulled at my heartstrings, and I thought I could add a bit of Harry's pain and frustration too.

Date: 2007-10-18 01:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Thanks. I enjoy reading (and writing) another's pov, especially when the original has an emotional side that plays well to an alternate pov. Glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2007-10-18 01:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Heh. Yeah, Harry has a soft spot for the guy. *rolls eyes*

Glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2007-10-18 06:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] piratesmile331.livejournal.com
Ah, Evil!Jae makes an appearance. Still working on that Halloween fic?

Date: 2007-10-18 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thrnbrooke.livejournal.com
Tooo bad they can't move the portrait to the dungeons!

Date: 2007-10-18 07:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Agreed. I have a solution! Harry buys Draco an iPod for Christmas!

Date: 2007-10-19 06:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lackofmendacity.livejournal.com
Oh, poor Draco... *sniffles*

But I'm glad Harry's there to comfort him and make it all better with yummy boysex. *g*

Heheh, ever-loving, sweet-natured Lucius? *snickers* Loved that line. :D

Date: 2007-10-19 04:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
Harry will make him feel all better with very imaginative yummy boy!sex in no time.

Heh. Sweet, sweet Lucius ... so often misunderstood. *snorts*

Date: 2007-10-27 03:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.livejournal.com
OH! You remixed my story and you made me tear up. *sniff*
You're right, it's not just torture for Draco, but it rips Harry apart every time, too.
Beautifully portrayed. *hugs*

Date: 2007-10-27 03:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alisanne.livejournal.com
Have I mentioned that I love you, Jae? *g*

Date: 2007-10-27 04:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com
*hands tissue*

Yay! I'm so glad you liked it. :)

I really loved the way you portrayed Draco's pain in the original, and enjoyed showing Harry's pov.

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