omg - their voices are so clear. And the interaction, the words are perfect. This is just a wonderful 'trapped together' story. It felt really fresh.
But Potter did more than look. He leaned closer, then reached his hand out, tracing his fingers over the thin line. "I'm sorry," he repeated, voice barely above a whisper. He kept touching, feather-light caresses that wreaked havoc with Draco's nerves, not to mention another part of his body. "So sorry."
Draco closed his eyes, his emotions threatening to break free if he dared to look in Potter's direction. Draco fought to control his breathing but failed miserably as Potter continued to trace his fingertips over Draco's scar, whispering apologies all the while. By the time Potter drew his shirt closed again, Draco's heart was beating so fast it threatened to burst free.
That part - the emotions and the physical touch - I was breathless. Wow! Thank you for writing this.
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Date: 2010-07-30 01:43 pm (UTC)But Potter did more than look. He leaned closer, then reached his hand out, tracing his fingers over the thin line. "I'm sorry," he repeated, voice barely above a whisper. He kept touching, feather-light caresses that wreaked havoc with Draco's nerves, not to mention another part of his body. "So sorry."
Draco closed his eyes, his emotions threatening to break free if he dared to look in Potter's direction. Draco fought to control his breathing but failed miserably as Potter continued to trace his fingertips over Draco's scar, whispering apologies all the while. By the time Potter drew his shirt closed again, Draco's heart was beating so fast it threatened to burst free.
That part - the emotions and the physical touch - I was breathless. Wow! Thank you for writing this.