Aww, this was so cute! I love Luna ... she's a rather tricky one. The way you write Harry and Draco is sweet.
"Are you going to stand there and stare at me all day, Potter, or are you going to sit down?" Malfoy asked without so much as looking up from his book. "I know I'm dashing, but you could exercise some subtlety."
"Er …"
"Ah, yes … still as eloquent as ever, I see."
The dialogue rocked!
And the flash forward to the future, where they're all adorable and together was great. I couldn't stop smiling at the CUTE!
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Date: 2009-02-08 08:18 am (UTC)"Are you going to stand there and stare at me all day, Potter, or are you going to sit down?" Malfoy asked without so much as looking up from his book. "I know I'm dashing, but you could exercise some subtlety."
"Er …"
"Ah, yes … still as eloquent as ever, I see."
The dialogue rocked!
And the flash forward to the future, where they're all adorable and together was great. I couldn't stop smiling at the CUTE!
Wonderful job! :D