Sweetness (H/D, PG-13)

[sesheta66]

Title: Sweetness
Author: sesheta_66
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 228
Pairing/Characters: Harry/Draco
Challenges: awdt's prompt of "Hmm ... yum," hd_pots_n_porn's prompt of "whipped cream," slythindor100's picture prompt of a man staring out the window, hd_fluff's prompt of a wrought iron table in the rain, enchanted_jae's JMDC prompt of "It can't rain all the time," from The Crow, and harrylovesdraco's prompt of "April showers."
Summary: Draco tries to cheer Harry up when their Quidditch game is rained out.
Disclaimer: The characters contained herein are not mine. They belong to JK Rowling and her publishers. No money is being made from this fiction, which is presented for entertainment purposes only.


Harry sat staring out the window, listening to the April showers beat down upon the wrought iron table in their yard. Sighing, he thought about the Quidditch match that had been cancelled. It can't rain all the time, he thought, wondering if they'd reschedule for later in the weekend. Gone were the days of playing in any weather; they were adults, after all.

So deep in thought was he that he hadn't heard Draco approach before his eyes were covered and something sweet-smelling was being pressed against his lips. He opened his mouth, and Draco slipped the cream-covered strawberry in. The hand was removed from his eyes, and he saw Draco leaning in for a kiss.

It was a soft kiss, full of love and promise, tongues swirling amidst the sweetness of the fruit. "Mmm ... yum," Draco said as he pulled back.

Harry stood up, taking Draco into his arms and pressing a chaste kiss to his lips. "What was that for?"

"You looked so disappointed when the game was called off today, so I thought I'd try to make up for it in some small way."

"Oh? And how do you plan to do that?" Harry asked.

"Bring the whipped cream to the bedroom and find out," Draco said with a cheeky grin. "I plan to have you flying in a whole different way."

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Comments

[gurliemoviegeek.livejournal.com]

Six prompts in 228 words!?! OMG! *bows before your awesomeness*

Lovely story, darling. Cute, sweet and smexy all at the same time!

Well done, you!

[hapendfro.livejournal.com]

I agree with the previous commenter. That is pretty damned impressive. Not only that, it's really good too.

[absynthedrinker.livejournal.com]

That is some very sexy imagery you've given us. Proving once again that "less really is more". Wonderful! Thank you.

Bubba

P.S. It's "wrought" iron table honey.

[piratesmile331.livejournal.com]

Very, very yummy!

[winter-june.livejournal.com]

Awwwww. So delicious and suggestive! Strawberries and whipped cream is my second best after orange dark chocolate!

[lijahlover.livejournal.com]

*Yummy* So lovely and wonderful *sighs*

[kaykayen.livejournal.com]

This is definitely sweetness! Draco is an absolute doll!

And you have definitely earned your "Queen of Prompts" crown!

[faithwood.livejournal.com]

That was yummy. And impressive. Also, kinda sneaky! :D

[lasting-melodys.livejournal.com]

Wow, this was very cute! I loved it!

"Bring the whipped cream to the bedroom and find out," Draco said with a cheeky grin. "I plan to have you flying in a whole different way."

That line had me cracking up! It is perfect. :]

-snuggles you-

[tray-la-la.livejournal.com]

so cute! and an utterly fabulous last line!

[svgurl.livejournal.com]

Aww, that was adorable! I so have to agree ... I'm awed by how you managed to fit six prompts in there! I bow before your greatness.

Draco's adorable! Harry's a lucky guy. ;) And you write those two so well!

Great work!

(http://s228.photobucket.com/albums/ee155/svgurl410/?action=view&current=73.jpg)

[coffeejunkii.livejournal.com]

awww! deep down draco's such a romantic :)

[enchanted-jae.livejournal.com]

Six prompts? Is that a new record for you? Ha ha! I think the most I've ever gotten was five.

What a lovely, sweet drabble. Thanks for writing for the JMDC and two of my comms!

[thrnbrooke.livejournal.com]

Go Draco! Nice plan!

[madamingmaskara.livejournal.com]

woot! really sexy without saying a lot! XD

[moonlitdark.livejournal.com]

Lovely drabble. :) I especially like the last line!

[chyldofeternity.livejournal.com]

Six prompts? You managed six prompts in 228 words?? Oh dear god we need you negotaiting international peace talks! They'd end up a lot better and take a lot less time!

*worships the queen!*

[enablelove.livejournal.com]

AWWW!! V. cute babe, and am awed at how you can fit all those prompts in less than 500 words!

[inamac.livejournal.com]

I just love this line:

It was a soft kiss, full of love and promise, tongues swirling amidst the sweetness of the fruit.

Melts.

[idontgiveafaux.livejournal.com]

awww and yay for romantic!draco *g*

"Bring the whipped cream to the bedroom and find out," Draco said with a cheeky grin. "I plan to have you flying in a whole different way."

::melts:: i would like to witness this different way of flying :D

[severkarogueova.livejournal.com]

Awww, that was sweet... Draco is so thoughtful ♥
I couldn't resist to share it with my friends. Here it is:
http://underthecover.wz.cz/index_2.htm
- Nice story, really sweet, I liked it
- Should have a sequel... what had happened in the bedroom...

[alexicyn.livejournal.com]

If that is what I got as replacement, it could rain all the hell it wanted to! :D