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Title: Sweetness
Author: [livejournal.com profile] sesheta_66
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 228
Pairing/Characters: Harry/Draco
Challenges: [livejournal.com profile] awdt's prompt of "Hmm ... yum," [livejournal.com profile] hd_pots_n_porn's prompt of "whipped cream," [livejournal.com profile] slythindor100's picture prompt of a man staring out the window, [livejournal.com profile] hd_fluff's prompt of a wrought iron table in the rain, [livejournal.com profile] enchanted_jae's JMDC prompt of "It can't rain all the time," from The Crow, and [livejournal.com profile] harrylovesdraco's prompt of "April showers."
Summary: Draco tries to cheer Harry up when their Quidditch game is rained out.
Disclaimer: The characters contained herein are not mine. They belong to JK Rowling and her publishers. No money is being made from this fiction, which is presented for entertainment purposes only.


Harry sat staring out the window, listening to the April showers beat down upon the wrought iron table in their yard. Sighing, he thought about the Quidditch match that had been cancelled. It can't rain all the time, he thought, wondering if they'd reschedule for later in the weekend. Gone were the days of playing in any weather; they were adults, after all.

So deep in thought was he that he hadn't heard Draco approach before his eyes were covered and something sweet-smelling was being pressed against his lips. He opened his mouth, and Draco slipped the cream-covered strawberry in. The hand was removed from his eyes, and he saw Draco leaning in for a kiss.

It was a soft kiss, full of love and promise, tongues swirling amidst the sweetness of the fruit. "Mmm ... yum," Draco said as he pulled back.

Harry stood up, taking Draco into his arms and pressing a chaste kiss to his lips. "What was that for?"

"You looked so disappointed when the game was called off today, so I thought I'd try to make up for it in some small way."

"Oh? And how do you plan to do that?" Harry asked.

"Bring the whipped cream to the bedroom and find out," Draco said with a cheeky grin. "I plan to have you flying in a whole different way."

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Date: 2008-04-19 10:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gurliemoviegeek.livejournal.com
Six prompts in 228 words!?! OMG! *bows before your awesomeness*

Lovely story, darling. Cute, sweet and smexy all at the same time!

Well done, you!

Date: 2008-04-19 11:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hapendfro.livejournal.com
I agree with the previous commenter. That is pretty damned impressive. Not only that, it's really good too.

Date: 2008-04-19 01:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] absynthedrinker.livejournal.com
That is some very sexy imagery you've given us. Proving once again that "less really is more". Wonderful! Thank you.

Bubba

P.S. It's "wrought" iron table honey.

Date: 2008-04-19 02:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] winter-june.livejournal.com
Awwwww. So delicious and suggestive! Strawberries and whipped cream is my second best after orange dark chocolate!

Date: 2008-04-19 03:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lijahlover.livejournal.com
*Yummy* So lovely and wonderful *sighs*

Date: 2008-04-19 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kaykayen.livejournal.com
This is definitely sweetness! Draco is an absolute doll!

And you have definitely earned your "Queen of Prompts" crown!

Date: 2008-04-19 05:14 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] faithwood.livejournal.com
That was yummy. And impressive. Also, kinda sneaky! :D

Date: 2008-04-19 05:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lasting-melodys.livejournal.com
Wow, this was very cute! I loved it!

"Bring the whipped cream to the bedroom and find out," Draco said with a cheeky grin. "I plan to have you flying in a whole different way."

That line had me cracking up! It is perfect. :]

-snuggles you-

Date: 2008-04-19 06:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tray-la-la.livejournal.com
so cute! and an utterly fabulous last line!

Date: 2008-04-19 08:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] svgurl.livejournal.com
Aww, that was adorable! I so have to agree ... I'm awed by how you managed to fit six prompts in there! I bow before your greatness.

Draco's adorable! Harry's a lucky guy. ;) And you write those two so well!

Great work!

Image (http://s228.photobucket.com/albums/ee155/svgurl410/?action=view&current=73.jpg)

Date: 2008-04-19 10:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeejunkii.livejournal.com
awww! deep down draco's such a romantic :)

Date: 2008-04-20 06:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enchanted-jae.livejournal.com
Six prompts? Is that a new record for you? Ha ha! I think the most I've ever gotten was five.

What a lovely, sweet drabble. Thanks for writing for the JMDC and two of my comms!

Date: 2008-04-20 07:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thrnbrooke.livejournal.com
Go Draco! Nice plan!

Date: 2008-04-20 10:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] madamingmaskara.livejournal.com
woot! really sexy without saying a lot! XD

Date: 2008-04-20 11:57 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] moonlitdark.livejournal.com
Lovely drabble. :) I especially like the last line!

Date: 2008-04-20 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chyldofeternity.livejournal.com
Six prompts? You managed six prompts in 228 words?? Oh dear god we need you negotaiting international peace talks! They'd end up a lot better and take a lot less time!

*worships the queen!*

Date: 2008-04-20 06:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] enablelove.livejournal.com
AWWW!! V. cute babe, and am awed at how you can fit all those prompts in less than 500 words!

Date: 2008-04-21 04:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inamac.livejournal.com
I just love this line:

It was a soft kiss, full of love and promise, tongues swirling amidst the sweetness of the fruit.

Melts.

Date: 2008-04-22 04:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] idontgiveafaux.livejournal.com
awww and yay for romantic!draco *g*

"Bring the whipped cream to the bedroom and find out," Draco said with a cheeky grin. "I plan to have you flying in a whole different way."

::melts:: i would like to witness this different way of flying :D

Date: 2008-04-29 09:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] severkarogueova.livejournal.com
Awww, that was sweet... Draco is so thoughtful ♥
I couldn't resist to share it with my friends. Here it is:
http://underthecover.wz.cz/index_2.htm
- Nice story, really sweet, I liked it
- Should have a sequel... what had happened in the bedroom...

Date: 2013-11-22 04:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alexicyn.livejournal.com
If that is what I got as replacement, it could rain all the hell it wanted to! :D

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