The confusion and angst and pain was so palpable. I love that you left the character ambiguous cause while I was reading I was picturing Harry but at the same time could see it being Malfoy as well.
When does desire become betrayal? Is there such a thing as a definitive line drawn, or is it murkier than that? In matters of the heart, when is anything ever black and white?
Those three lines just hit me. This is heartbreakingly beautiful and to convey such emotion in so little words...wonderful.
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Date: 2008-02-16 06:26 am (UTC)When does desire become betrayal? Is there such a thing as a definitive line drawn, or is it murkier than that? In matters of the heart, when is anything ever black and white?
Those three lines just hit me. This is heartbreakingly beautiful and to convey such emotion in so little words...wonderful.