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sesheta_66 ([personal profile] sesheta66) wrote2007-09-13 10:41 pm
Entry tags:

Lashing Out (H/D, R/Hr, PG)

Title: Lashing Out
Author: [livejournal.com profile] sesheta_66
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~ 390
Pairing/Characters: Harry/Draco, Ron/Hermione
Challenges: [livejournal.com profile] harrylovesdraco's September prompt #3 - "Well, that's not exactly what I had in mind."
Summary: Ron learns that he ought to be more careful when making suggestions.
Disclaimer: The characters contained herein are not mine. They belong to JK Rowling and her publishers. No money is being made from this fiction, which is presented for entertainment purposes only.




Harry was looking across the crowded bar, glaring at something ... or someone. Ron followed his gaze to find Malfoy standing near the doorway, deep in conversation with some bloke who looked very interested in the blonde.

"Why don't you just go over there and talk to him, Harry? You can't keep all this bottled up inside, you know. It's not healthy." Harry gave him a very confused look. "Seriously, Harry, go tell him what you think of him. It's been a long time coming."

Harry stared, mouth hanging open in disbelief. He looked like he was going to say something, then changed his mind, frowned and continued to gape at his friend.

"No better time than the present," Ron continued, then nudged his friend in Malfoy's direction. "Go on, then."

Harry closed his mouth, squared his shoulders, and replied, "Yeah, Ron. I think you're right. I've waited too long to tell him how I really feel." And he was off.

"You have no idea what you just did," came Hermione's voice from behind him. She grinned knowingly as he looked at her.

"What? Malfoy's a git and he deserves a good tongue-lashing from Harry."

At those words, Hermione nearly collapsed in a fit of laughter. "A tongue-lashing, you say?" she asked once she had regained her composure. "That's one way to put it," she said, nodding her head in Harry's direction.

He had made his way across the room by now, and was leaning in, hand resting on the wall behind Malfoy, speaking into his ear. The other bloke was walking away, glaring at the two of them.

"What -- " Ron began, but was cut off by Hermione.

"Just watch," she said, still grinning, with a glint in her eye.

To Ron's horror, he watched Harry's body move closer to Malfoy's, the Slytherin's one arm wrap around Harry's waist, and his other hand brush lightly through Harry's hair. And then ...

Ron let out a gasp as Harry leaned in and kissed Malfoy. Kissed him! And kept on kissing him.

Looking desperately at Hermione for some support, he was disappointed to see a look of satisfaction on her face. "Well, that's not exactly what I had in mind," he muttered.

"Well," Hermione smirked, "by the looks of things, Harry really is giving Draco a good tongue-lashing!"

[identity profile] svgurl.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 03:00 am (UTC)(link)
oh ron! how i love thee! that was just too hilarious . . . poor ron didn't see that one coming. :D this was very well done and i absolutely loved it. :D

great work!

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 03:02 am (UTC)(link)
Glad you liked it, and thanks for the comments. ;)

[identity profile] svgurl.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 03:04 am (UTC)(link)
OOOH? do i get the cookies? yay . . . *runs away with cookies*

[identity profile] yumikoyoshihana.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 03:22 am (UTC)(link)
*collapses in a fit of giggles* I LOVE IT! Oh, that is too cute for words. Oblivious!Ron and AllKnowing!Hermione! *shakes head* Lovely!

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 04:04 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed.

[identity profile] ladyxmoonlight.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 03:29 am (UTC)(link)
Silly, onblivious Ron. I love how not only your Harry and Draco are in-character but Ron and Hermione as well. Very nicely done and so cute! <3

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 04:04 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks for your kind comments.

[identity profile] nimielle.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 03:42 am (UTC)(link)
Ooooh, this was nice! *grins*

Oh Ron *pinches his cheeks* XD he's such an innocent! ;)

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 04:05 am (UTC)(link)
Hee! Glad you liked.

[identity profile] piratesmile331.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 05:13 am (UTC)(link)
*hugs Oblivious!Ron*
So what happens next with Harry and Draco (enquiring minds want to know)?

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 10:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmm ... who knows? Lots, I presume. ;)

[identity profile] lire-casander.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 06:52 am (UTC)(link)
Excuse me while I laugh out really loud - Hermione collapsing in a fit of laughter is really nothing compared with what I'm doing right now!

Oh, Ron, don't say you didn't see it coming, boy!

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 10:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh. I do like to torture Ron so ....

[identity profile] enchanted-jae.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 06:59 am (UTC)(link)
*dies laughing* Clueless!Ron strikes again!

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 10:21 pm (UTC)(link)
*pets him between giggle fits*

[identity profile] nekochan23.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 07:09 am (UTC)(link)
*grin, big grin, grin*
XD

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 10:21 pm (UTC)(link)
:D

[identity profile] prettyhairs.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 08:17 am (UTC)(link)
Poor Ronniekins!
He can be very useful, can't he? *g*
That was really nice!

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 10:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, he can. Poor guy.

[identity profile] kaykayen.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 09:01 am (UTC)(link)
Silly Ron! But, of course, he's right. Draco needs a good tongue-lashing from Harry. He definitely seems to be enjoying it ~_^

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 10:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Indeed. ;)

[identity profile] gurliemoviegeek.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 11:02 am (UTC)(link)
Oh poor Ron!
Always the last to know!
Hermione should really take pity on him every once in a while and clue him into things before hand...
*holds sides and shakes with laughter*

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 10:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Ah ... Ron is so easy to torment!

[identity profile] thrnbrooke.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 12:27 pm (UTC)(link)
*smile* Fantastic!

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 10:23 pm (UTC)(link)
*grins* - thanks!

[identity profile] tabiji.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 01:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! Very nice. Tongue lashing indeed!

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 10:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Why thank you. *giggles* - cute icon.

[identity profile] dysonrules.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 03:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Way to go, Ron!!! LOL! This was delightful. Sometimes I just want to cuddle Hermione when she knows everything.

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 10:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh. Hermione always knows everything ... typical woman! :D
sirenprincess: (Draco at window)

[personal profile] sirenprincess 2007-09-14 03:52 pm (UTC)(link)
How cute. Go Drarry. Using Ron to initiate it was so funny.

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 10:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, well ... I do like to torment poor Ron. ;)
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[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-14 11:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh. Thanks.

[identity profile] xmidnightblazex.livejournal.com 2007-09-15 12:22 am (UTC)(link)
Tongue-Lashing...Oh thats brilliant. -Laughs.- Have I mentioned that I love Ron?

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-15 12:25 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks. :)

I think you may have mentioned the Ron thing before. Glad you liked it.

[identity profile] facecat.livejournal.com 2007-09-15 03:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha! Excellent! And thanx for entering.

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-15 03:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. And I love me a good challenge. This one was particularly fun.

[identity profile] lackofmendacity.livejournal.com 2007-09-15 06:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Ron, though he did ask for it, I guess. *snickers*

And yay for clever!Hermione. :D

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-15 10:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Heheheh. I do like to torment poor Ronniekins. He's just so oblivious that he would never have caught on otherwise. Heh.

[identity profile] pulsebeat.livejournal.com 2007-09-16 03:26 am (UTC)(link)
*laughs* This is fantastic!

Tongue-lashing indeed . . . ;)

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-16 03:28 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

[identity profile] jean-c-pepper.livejournal.com 2007-09-17 07:02 pm (UTC)(link)
I hadn't read this. This was lovely.

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-09-17 09:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much. Glad you enjoyed.

[identity profile] bite-me-luv.livejournal.com 2007-10-04 07:18 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, lovely picture you draw here :) and Ron's priceless - as usual ;)

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-10-05 01:47 am (UTC)(link)
Heheheh. Poor Ron. Thanks for reading & commenting. :)

[identity profile] w-aterlily.livejournal.com 2007-11-30 10:26 am (UTC)(link)
haha, Ron is kind of dumb :P

[identity profile] w-aterlily.livejournal.com 2007-11-30 02:22 pm (UTC)(link)
haha your icon is great xD

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2007-11-30 03:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! Thanks. It's courtesy of my friend [livejournal.com profile] melmoe1 who adores Ron.