I know it's my weakest point. When I try to describe scenes, it generally comes out sounding like a math or engineering text. Dull, dry, boring. So there's no better way to improve than practice, and there's no faster way to fix mistakes than to have them pointed out to you, so yeah. I'm actually ASKING for people to rip apart my work. I got about 13 people to agree (I'm not posting publicly, but rather to the group), I believe, so here's hoping it helps.

And thanks for the encouragement. I can occasionally put something decent on paper, but it doesn't come naturally very often. I'm more of a "The place was so large, he was sure he could fit his entire house into the foyer" kind of person than a "The sheer enormity of the structure overwhelmed him, as though it had a life of its own, crushing down upon him with its awe-inspiring vastness" kind of writer.