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sesheta_66 ([personal profile] sesheta66) wrote2008-01-18 03:47 am

Overheard - part 1 of Family Secrets (H/D, PG)

Title: Overheard - part 1 of Family Secrets
Author: [livejournal.com profile] sesheta_66
Rating: PG
Word Count: 511
Pairing/Characters: Harry/Draco (past), Albus Severus Potter, Lily Potter
Challenges: [livejournal.com profile] awdt's prompts of "Well, it's not really that big, is it?" and my GJ 100_prompts entry #033 - "Command".
Summary: Lily shares with her brother a little family secret.
Disclaimer: The characters contained herein are not mine. They belong to JK Rowling and her publishers. No money is being made from this fiction, which is presented for entertainment purposes only.

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"Can you keep a secret?" Lily asked her brother.

"'Course I can," Al said indignantly. "I'm not the one who always --"

"This one's huge," Lily interrupted.

"Well, it's not really that big, is it? I mean, we're not going to get into trouble for not telling anyone, are we?" Al didn't plan on any more detentions this week. He and Scorpius had already had two.

"No, it's nothing like that, it's just ..." Lily scanned the room, then grabbed her brother by the arm and dragged him out through the portrait hole, down the hall and into a storage cupboard. "We can talk here," she said. Waving her wand, she muttered Lumos.

Al looked at his sister incredulously. "This is a bloody cupboard, Lily! What are you playing at?"

"Shh, someone will hear us. I didn't want anyone else to hear what I have to say."

"Fine then. Spit it out and get it over with so we can get back to the common room," he commanded.

"Did you know that Dad and Mr Malfoy ..." Her voice trailed off and she stared at something behind Al, not looking him in the eye.

He chuckled, relieved that this was all it was. "That they were enemies? Of course I knew. I thought everyone did. That doesn't change the fact that Scorpius and I are friends, though."

"No, that's not what I mean, Al. They weren't just enemies."

"I know. They had some major fights, they hated each other, and Mr Malfoy did some stuff that Dad never wanted to talk about. He stopped Mum from telling me one time. Then Mum stopped Dad from telling me something terrible he had done to Mr Malfoy. It was a weird conversation, but don't worry, Lily. It won't affect my friendship with Scorpius. He knows all this too."

"Al, they were together. Dad and Mr Malfoy were together."

"Of course they were together. They were in the same year at school, and they fought in the same war."

"No, Al. They were together, like Mum and Dad are together now."

Al stared at his sister. After almost a minute of silence, he finally asked, "What?"

"Yeah. Apparently it was after the war."

"That's crap, and you know it!" Al barked at his sister. "Who told you that?"

"Our cousin Rose. She heard Uncle Ron and Aunt Hermione one night after they found out you and Scorpius were friends. Uncle Ron said something about it not being a good idea at all, and that it could only lead to trouble. They apparently said a lot of stuff, but one thing was clear. Uncle Ron never wants Mum to find out about it. Never."

As Al tore open the door, Lily called, "Where are you going?"

"To find out if my best friend knows anything about this."

"And then what?"

"I guess we'll have to figure it out together, won't we?"

Lily watched her brother head towards the Slytherin dungeons, a feeling of trepidation falling over her. Merlin, I hope he doesn't do anything stupid!

Part 2 - Rumours

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[identity profile] softly-sweetly.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 09:07 am (UTC)(link)
OMG, just... OMG *bounces*

This looks like a brialliant set up, I already love your Al *g*

will there be Harry/Ginny? Will Harry/Draco resurface? Or can't you say?

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 09:12 am (UTC)(link)
Well, I'm making it Epilogue-compliant, and Harry is currently with Ginny. Other than that, I can't say.

Glad you like it. ♥ I have to admit, I like Al too.

You know ... I was headed to bed, and suddenly a conversation between Lily & Al seeped into my mind to match this prompt, and I meant to capture a couple of lines, just to prod myself with tomorrow (er ... later today), and I ended up writing the whole damn thing.

Grr ... plot bunnies will be the death of me. From lack of sleep, I swear! *g*

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 09:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Forgot your cookies, hon. :)

[identity profile] svgurl.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 09:29 am (UTC)(link)
Brilliant start! I really love this story already. This part was just excellent. Your Al rocks!

I can't wait to see what happens next.

Thanks for writing & sharing!

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[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 06:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, hon. I think I'm going to have fun with this one.

[identity profile] piratesmile331.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 10:52 am (UTC)(link)
What a fantastic beginning! Can't wait to find out what follows.

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 06:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. :)

[identity profile] inamac.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 10:55 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I'm looking forward to that conversation! Great hook to start (it worked, I'm hooked).

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 06:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! I hooked someone! ;)

[identity profile] jamie2109.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 10:56 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, yay! Another excellent writer writing AS/S! Or are they going to remain just friends?

And I wanna see H/D come back together, too!

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 06:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Hmm ... right now, it's H/D (past). We'll see where it goes from here. I decided that I can torture people with once-a-week updates too! ;)

[identity profile] valkyrie17.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 03:59 pm (UTC)(link)
This is an interesting start...

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 06:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks.

[identity profile] decynthus.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 05:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Lily asks Al if he can keep a secret. Evidently, she can't! But without her big mouth, we wouldn't have a story, would we?

I liked that glimpse of Harry and Ginny and the "weird conversation" through Al's eyes. I think it's fun when you can pull off a scene like that where the reader knows more about it than the character telling it.

Great start - looking forward to more!

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Nah, she's not known for keeping secrets well. But I suspect she'll keep this one in the family.

Yeah, I like when the reader can think, "I know what it is!" that the character doesn't.

Thanks.

[identity profile] lackofmendacity.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 05:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee, I hope Albus does something very stupid cunning! *is excited* :D

Heheh, I love how confused he was at first... not so quick, that one. *g*

But yay, you're starting a new series! ^_^ *hugs you tight*

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 06:42 pm (UTC)(link)
We'll see what he & Scorp plan. ;)

Well, in fairness, being told your Dad was with another man, when you have never known him to be with anyone but your Mum, isn't something you'd be expecting.

Just what I need ... another series! I really am insane. *clings*

[identity profile] lackofmendacity.livejournal.com 2008-01-19 04:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Heheh, is this my cue to berate you for starting another series?

...

Hee, go Sesheta! Embrace the insane fic love! ^_^

*is a useless cue-person and proud of it* :D

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2008-01-19 11:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Nah, I'll berate myself enough. *g* I just get an idea and ... well ... I don't have time to write the whole story in one go, so ...

Then another prompt comes along, giving me another idea ... and another series is born.

The Missing Years (the series I started when I finished DH) is sitting off on its own, looking lonely ... waiting for me to return to it. Must do that soon. At least with one more installment. Oooh! And Return to Hogwarts left off after two or three as well. BAH! Maybe I should forget my novels and just write fanfic full time. ;)

[identity profile] thrnbrooke.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 08:20 pm (UTC)(link)
And does he do anything stupid? I sooo need more!

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 09:13 pm (UTC)(link)
Heheheh. You'll have to wait and see. ♥

Um ... this one will likely be updated once a week, depending on the AWDT prompts.

[identity profile] winter-june.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 09:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Great start. The 'Family secret' is now in the hands of the (Stunned) Next Generation! *just waiting for more*

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, hon. ♥

[identity profile] lijahlover.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 11:34 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG! This was brilliant!:D

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2008-01-18 11:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, hon.

[identity profile] psyko-kittie.livejournal.com 2008-01-19 04:01 am (UTC)(link)
Interesting. More please!

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2008-01-19 04:18 am (UTC)(link)
Yup, yup. I'm planning on weekly updates, depending on the AWDT prompt. Thanks. :)

[identity profile] idontgiveafaux.livejournal.com 2008-01-19 03:19 pm (UTC)(link)
ooh, i think this one is going to have a lot of fireworks in it! great start so far hon :)

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2008-01-19 11:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, hon. I'm looking forward to it.

[identity profile] accioscar.livejournal.com 2008-01-21 08:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooohh! This looks interesting! Can't wait to see where it goes...

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2008-01-21 08:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Glad you like it so far. I've emailed you on the rest. ;)

[identity profile] aliiiiiiiix.livejournal.com 2008-01-24 09:57 am (UTC)(link)
this is fun! XD hah, me liked it, having the kids in the story... and zOMG! Harry being with Draco first before Ginny! the best Epilogue compliant plot ever. LoL

so will this have some of the Al/Scorpius? O.O

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2008-01-24 03:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.

Not sure about the AS/S part. It's definitely a Harry/Draco fic. For now, Al and Scorpius are good friends.

[identity profile] charmed310.livejournal.com 2008-02-18 03:22 am (UTC)(link)
Oh the EXCITEMENT!

Luffs it!

[identity profile] sesheta-66.livejournal.com 2008-02-18 04:11 am (UTC)(link)
Glad you're enjoying it. I kinda like this series myself, because it's neat to look at it from the kids' perspectives.