ext_260537 ([identity profile] decynthus.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sesheta66 2008-01-18 05:05 pm (UTC)

Lily asks Al if he can keep a secret. Evidently, she can't! But without her big mouth, we wouldn't have a story, would we?

I liked that glimpse of Harry and Ginny and the "weird conversation" through Al's eyes. I think it's fun when you can pull off a scene like that where the reader knows more about it than the character telling it.

Great start - looking forward to more!

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