Lily asks Al if he can keep a secret. Evidently, she can't! But without her big mouth, we wouldn't have a story, would we?
I liked that glimpse of Harry and Ginny and the "weird conversation" through Al's eyes. I think it's fun when you can pull off a scene like that where the reader knows more about it than the character telling it.
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I liked that glimpse of Harry and Ginny and the "weird conversation" through Al's eyes. I think it's fun when you can pull off a scene like that where the reader knows more about it than the character telling it.
Great start - looking forward to more!