ext_70948 ([identity profile] aki-hoshi.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sesheta66 2008-07-17 03:37 am (UTC)

Aw...so sweet. I like it! :D

And the beta in me says: I noticed one small error in this sentence: I think there should be an "it" after the first comma...sounds a bit odd without some kind of signifier there.

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