svgurl ([identity profile] svgurl.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sesheta66 2008-06-13 11:51 am (UTC)

Wow! That was just wonderful. It was amazing from start to finish.

"Where did you hide it?!" Harry yelled as he stormed into Hermione's office.

"Hide what?" Hermione asked, clearly perplexed.

"The book, Hermione."

"Book?"

"Yes, the Guidebook on How to Make Harry Potter's Life Hell."

Hermione smirked. "Oh, that book. I loaned it out."


That made me laugh! You are great at writing dialogue.

But you did a fabulous job with Veela!Harry. The ending was wonderful. Aww I &hearts Harry & Draco! You write them so well too!

Great work!

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